gary
Wishes To Be A Distraction
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Post by gary on Mar 10, 2015 22:36:24 GMT -6
Never known you . Time want by when we drifted apart thinking of ourself and not giving a thought to how we are I guess life in the last year I've never really known you at all I haven't known you It's the not same when were first lovers we've grown apart and are lives are going in different directions like said I don't know you I've haven't known you your not the person I fell in love with I've haven't knowing you I wish we could go back to the days of the Friday night discos when were care free I knew you inside and out but we used talk and share everything we don't know each other anymore I've Haven't known you haven known you I just to know you any more
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Post by Sharon on Sept 3, 2021 22:27:27 GMT -6
Never known you . Time want by when we drifted apart thinking of ourself and not giving a thought to how we are I guess life in the last year I've never really known you at all I haven't known you It's the not same when were first lovers we've grown apart and are lives are going in different directions like said I don't know you I've haven't known you your not the person I fell in love with I've haven't knowing you I wish we could go back to the days of the Friday night discos when were care free I knew you inside and out but we used talk and share everything we don't know each other anymore I've Haven't known you haven known you I just to know you any more Thanks for sharing this Gary. My recommendation is that you break this down into a poetry format making it easier for the reader to follow your words. Unless of course you were writing this as a short sort of prose. Suggestion: Never known you Time went by when we drifted apart thinking of ourself and not giving a thought to how we are I guess life in the last year I've never really known you at all I haven't known you It's the not same when were first lovers we've grown apart and our lives are going in different directions like I said I don't know you I've haven't known you You’re not the person I fell in love with I haven’t known you I wish we could go back to the days of the Friday night discos when were care free I knew you inside and out but we used to talk and share everything we don't know each other anymore I haven’t known you I haven’t known you I just want to know you more |
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