grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Apr 23, 2006 19:49:32 GMT -6
a leather clown’s pernicious frown of doubtful doubled texturing
was weaving waves most withering in heavy steps on stalwart stares
where i passed him crying there i knelt and licked his salty soul
and saw he’d seen the morning fold a peachy pleasure form for me
still undeterred he much preferred to glower toward the flower in the weeds
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Post by Laura on Apr 24, 2006 18:29:39 GMT -6
I don't understand half your poetry . . . This though: " where i passed him crying there i knelt and licked his salty soul
and saw he’d seen the morning fold a peachy pleasure form for me" --was beautiful all put together like that
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Apr 25, 2006 15:12:16 GMT -6
"was weaving waves most withering"
I like that line. So many w's and I love the word 'weaving.'
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