grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Apr 14, 2006 19:24:41 GMT -6
nihilists
junkies
jumped up
on
nothing
ghost
my spine
is
covered in
cockroaches
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Post by Laura on Apr 14, 2006 19:57:24 GMT -6
So are these two different poems? Anyways, short ... probably could be made into longer poems but no need. Cockroaches are creepy. I hate insects, despise ... I loathe them actually. If we could survive without them, I would destroy them all. There's not much really to say about these pieces though.
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grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Apr 14, 2006 20:27:59 GMT -6
yeah two seperate poems, Bukowski's influence, he wrote, a couple of poems, that were only a title, and many that were only a few words, mine are lacking, but it was a first attempt, it's hard to have an impact with only a few words
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Post by Laura on Apr 14, 2006 21:55:30 GMT -6
So very true but obviously, it can be done
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Post by Only Me on Jul 4, 2006 23:55:41 GMT -6
nice. could be better with a little practice. but practice does make perfect. I would like to see more like this from you.
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