grifter
A Devoted Distraction
Posts: 135
|
Post by grifter on Apr 11, 2006 19:11:45 GMT -6
don’t ask me questions in the morning when I’m sailing it’s hard enough being far from shore
i can’t answer thinly in the wind we’re all Learned here about butterflies
and I won’t walk any faster
|
|
|
Post by thecrazybeautiful on Apr 12, 2006 12:25:47 GMT -6
I liked it, but the last line seemed out of place. I don't really know why, it just did.
|
|
|
Post by Laura on Apr 12, 2006 14:47:42 GMT -6
I'm pretty unsure about what this is about (I know you'll have an explanation, right? Heh) ... but I liked these lines: " when I’m sailing it’s hard enough being far from shore" --it's hard to comment on something when I'm unsure of what it is about ... and even harder when I can't even gather something for my own thoughts. Does that make sense? Jamble jamble
|
|