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Post by zeropain83 on Apr 5, 2006 10:45:05 GMT -6
what is it like to have a friend what is it like to lose one does any one know the type of pain that can come from a simple poison friends are almost pointless, when you have to loose them blood coming from the inside showing its ugly head..... can you feel the pain that the one thing is in some say it is just an animal but to me it is a friend killing a friend, helping a friend, living for a friend that is the way do you have a friend
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Apr 5, 2006 14:51:16 GMT -6
"friends are almost pointless, when you have to loose them"
That's an interesting idea, but I don't think the poem was fully up to it though.
Keep writing though!
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Post by Laura on Apr 7, 2006 14:30:58 GMT -6
I actually have no idea what this poem is really about ... the beginning seemed to fit but then after this line:
"friends are almost pointless, when you have to loose them"
--it went off. It needs work, mainly on what theme needs to be the focus because I'm confused.
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