Ge.e.-zus

[grifter]

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[Laura]

"unstrange drib
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le doubt-ers."

--was the only part that really stood out for me. It's not a favourite for me by you ... I found it to be written messy, I'm sure that's what you were going for, I don't know. My brain is low, I can't think of anything else to write.

[thecrazybeautiful]

I guess this kinda... falls apart. I know how it's meant to look and sound, but it's just a little confusing.

"Ge.e.-zus"

I find that to be kinda funny though.

[Only Me]

It really confused me, maybe I'm just to tired to read alot into it? who knows? but I just don't understand it.