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Post by Laura on Apr 1, 2006 16:23:16 GMT -6
with crowded mountains I find you in the snow counting sheep to fall asleep when you have the sound of crashing waves upon a liar's bed ticking clock dancing in circles like a top on your night stand
I hear the whispers, they speak to quiver - and take that axe and throw me in the river, we're all in twos, a pair of shivers.
the boots are climbing all alone with no feet to fill red linings for strings holding up clouds to feel like some sort of spring no music plays a trumpet boy is a lonely boy shadowed by a showered man
believe me when I say love is unappreciated here your tiny little teardrops all slipping down your cheek shaped like a madman on escape priviledges worn thin by doors without locks and alarm clocks
shoot them down, oh just shoot them all down they're wreckless endangerment of no encourgement unfortunate wired clowns with frowns and we're laughing with them somewhere.
in the cracks of the dirt your smile lurks tracing violet petals on a yellow rose to colour your world moreso it's heavy to eat we're all lying, liars, leeches just living off the limbs of others
I hear the whispers, they speak to quiver - and take that axe and throw me in the river, we're all in twos, a pair of shivers.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Apr 1, 2006 16:43:33 GMT -6
"counting sheep to fall asleep when you have the sound of crashing waves upon a liar's bed"
I like that. I don't know why, but I like that.
"I hear the whispers, they speak to quiver - and take that axe and throw me in the river, we're all in twos, a pair of shivers"
I LOVE the rhyming there. It makes me feel jumpy for some reason.
"the boots are climbing all alone with no feet to fill"
I like that image.
For some reason, this reminds me of a circus... I like it.
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stupidxgirl
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Post by stupidxgirl on Apr 1, 2006 18:40:33 GMT -6
"in the cracks of the dirt your smile lurks tracing violet petals on a yellow rose to colour your world moreso it's heavy to eat we're all lying, liars, leeches just living off the limbs of others" Thia is amazing! Apart these words aren't all too powerful, but they way you combined then with this brilliant rhythm was beautiful Wondeful job Laura!
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Post by grifter on Apr 2, 2006 19:27:31 GMT -6
"we're all in twos, a pair of shivers." lovely line
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