grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Mar 30, 2006 21:46:46 GMT -6
in the whereofsome
in the whereofsome the bodyofevery fancies faerietails
and in greensofblue a girlofone dances daintily
for oneofno except the selfofher; she is my mateofsoul.
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Post by Laura on Mar 31, 2006 21:12:28 GMT -6
" in greensofblue a girlofone dances" --I really liked the idea of putting the words together and meshing ... it's like meshing words together to make this beautiful sound and sentences. This was definitely interesting and superb! I really like how you made it: " mateofsoul" --changing it around from the usual "soul mate". Your mind thinks greatly  |
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stupidxgirl
A Devoted Distraction
So You Sailed Away...
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Post by stupidxgirl on Mar 31, 2006 21:19:35 GMT -6
I have to agree with Laura....This is amazing in my opinion <3 I love how you write.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Apr 1, 2006 10:21:48 GMT -6
"in greensofblue a girlofone dances"
I have to agree, this is good.
I like how you can make things so short say so much, and how you choose just the right words.
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Post by Only Me on Jul 5, 2006 0:10:29 GMT -6
I really like how you meshed the words to form a new one...
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