i'll write the uppermost of us

[grifter]

i'll write the uppermost of us

i’ll write the uppermost of us
in astral lungs of crustations
from jupiter to pegasus

and mix the quick quixotic tails
of every passing cosmic comet
to dim the frail psychotic well
of gravity upon us

still stellar stirrings string the streets
where pyramidal flowers bloom
constellations never meet
except in universal tombs

[Sharon]

i'll write the uppermost of us

i’ll write the uppermost of us
in astral lungs of crustations
from jupiter to pegasus

i like that, it's like you're saying that you're writing from some place that's light years away to a time that's believed to be only mythological. ...almost claiming to write about the impossible.

and mix the quick quixotic
tail of every passing cosmic comet
to dim the frail psychotic well
of gravity upon us

i think it's cool how you refer to outspace once again

still stellar stirrings string the streets
where pyramidal flowers bloom
constellations never meet
except in universal tombs

and you remain consistent with, i think that was nice. thanks for the read

[Laura]

"and mix the quick quixotic tails
of every passing cosmic comet
to dim the frail psychotic well
of gravity upon us"

--I loved the way this slid off the tongue ... you have such a way with that

"constellations never meet
except in universal tombs"

--I love this whole idea of constellations never meeting and I love the word "tombs" too. I always like poetry that makes me go "god that's such a good idea" ... seems to always be that way with you.

[Only Me]

It flows so well and paints a nice picture. Me likes~