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Today
Jan 2, 2013 22:00:43 GMT -6
Post by QueenPaige4 on Jan 2, 2013 22:00:43 GMT -6
Every time I see your face all I want to do is shake you I want to get all your emotions to the surface I want you to talk to me Tell me how you feel What's going through your mind I'm worried I don't know what to do I've been in your shoes But every time we hang out you are so happy Even though I know it's because of me I should feel honored not scared and ready to flee But I love you like a little sister You mean more to me than just my best friend We've been through a lot and you know I'm always here for you I guess I'm confused Even though I shouldn't be I know what you are going through I'm just scared of what may happen I don't want you to leave me I don't want you to go I just want to be best friends forever But I'm pretty sure you already know That nothing in this world is worth ending your life Nothing in this world should make you feel the way you do I speak from experience I speak the truth But somehow even though I know what you are going through I'm just scared that you may end up worse than I was Worse than I am And what's worse than that is death.
** Not sure what to name this and this was all free hand. Pretty sure this is crappy**
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Jan 3, 2013 1:55:35 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Jan 3, 2013 1:55:35 GMT -6
Thanks for posting anyway . You know... If you aren't happy with it, revise and edit until you are. When I write, I think... Am I delivering exactly what I wanted to say? Can my readers relate/understand or is it open for interpretation? Does it flow nicely? Usually I'm happy when I can honestly say yes to those questions.
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Today
Jan 4, 2013 15:43:43 GMT -6
Post by QueenPaige4 on Jan 4, 2013 15:43:43 GMT -6
The more I read it the more I'm happy with the way it turned out.
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Jan 4, 2013 22:18:08 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Jan 4, 2013 22:18:08 GMT -6
The more I read it the more I'm happy with the way it turned out. That's great
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Jan 8, 2013 19:41:41 GMT -6
Post by QueenPaige4 on Jan 8, 2013 19:41:41 GMT -6
Yeah, I guess I'm just nervous about my friend
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