lane
Contently A Distraction
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Rain
Apr 22, 2012 10:11:21 GMT -6
Post by lane on Apr 22, 2012 10:11:21 GMT -6
I have a couple of writes about rain, this is one.
Rain
Come closer, do you think of me in your Winter rains, grays touch the ocean.
Come sit, my hands are warm merely empty.
I reminisce, incidental moments remind me....you too? the paths we walked are the same I`m sure, void of our impressions.
Do you think of me when the rains fall? it`s been so long...
Well better go, rain is passing. Thought you might like to know I think of you..
Rain is that way sometimes.
"question my abilities..never my heart"
© Copyright 2011 Vincent
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Apr 22, 2012 17:06:05 GMT -6
Post by Isabela on Apr 22, 2012 17:06:05 GMT -6
Hey that was quite nice, rain always makes me think deeply bout things I usually veer away from
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lane
Contently A Distraction
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Rain
Apr 22, 2012 18:58:37 GMT -6
Post by lane on Apr 22, 2012 18:58:37 GMT -6
hi mimi, nice to meet you, I have some subjects that I try to stay away from too..lol thank you for taking time to read, I`ll visit your work.
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Apr 22, 2012 22:04:05 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Apr 22, 2012 22:04:05 GMT -6
I think this is a strong stanza...I'm sure we've all experienced this - small almost insignificant moments yet imprints into our mind, our memories. We are put in these situations, regardless of what we know or our intentions. A great read - thank you.
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