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Post by allmeheart on Mar 18, 2006 2:25:12 GMT -6
[glow=navy,2,300]With those blue eyes I can’t help but fall for you Nothing shines as brilliantly Do you trust its true? Oh the wonders your eyes have seen With insight to your soul
The magic you possess Only a lover knows
Your eyes glitter and they gleam Opportunity sparkles from within Underestimating you Really is a sin
Sometimes forbidden love Opens unknown doors Under every mask Lies a mystery like yours
~Jessica~[/glow]
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Post by Laura on Mar 18, 2006 7:54:55 GMT -6
" With insight to your soul
The magic you possess Only a lover knows" --I liked how the first stanza flowed so well into the second one. And I like the second's wording. The ending: " Sometimes forbidden love Opens unknown doors Under every mask Lies a mystery like yours " --really interesting, I enjoyed this highly
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Post by Only Me on Jul 15, 2006 11:57:35 GMT -6
the font and coloring made it really hard to read. Other than that it was wonderful. My favorite lines are "The magic you possess Only a lover knows" I love them.
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