Magnets make me cry

[grifter]

Magnets make me cry

magnets make me cry
metal shavings and rainbows
colors with sparks
liquid handmaidens in the shape of desire
asking me to dance
and it's difficult to speak
with ultraviolet feet
when they're seeking the right angles to blink
but you enjoyed hearing my pupils
stretch and stiffen
into octagons with dark corners
or you wouldn’t have stood
so sideways
like a thin timepiece
with no edges

[Laura]

"and it's difficult to speak
with ultraviolet feet
when they're seeking the right angles to blink
but you enjoyed hearing my pupils
stretch and stiffen
into octagons with dark corners"

--the images I got here are spine tingling. It's kind of creepy in a way ... maybe that's just how I intrepret it ... I'm unsure. Talent, talent

[grifter]

yeah it's really abstract, it's an aftershock from that crashed relationship, it represents my shadow, and how it was drawn out of me, i like the idea of peoples' pupils taking different shapes with their mood, tears need to be colored too, red tears for anger (with octagon pupils), deep blue for sadness (with sharp triangle pupils), black for depression (squares), joy?, i see bright green there (with long ovals)....

[Laura]

That's interesting ... colourful tears would be wicked. Yeah mine would always be blue.

[stupidxgirl]

Oh I love this! And the idea of pupils and tears changing, that's rad LoL. Mine would be blue or red most of the time sadly. this was an awesome piece tho

[QueenPaige4]

wow. such an intersting way to catch peoples attention. i like the way you write. it makes us all think..you are a very good poet and i really like your poetry...nice job

paige

[Only Me]

grabbing. nice.