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Post by xxrebel86xx on Mar 1, 2006 19:38:15 GMT -6
Pull me down, Rip out my heart, Squeeze it until I have no life. That's what you want to do to me, That's what you want to see. To watch me fall, And hurt myself. Not only am I hurting inside, But on the outside, I am. You push me around, Leaving me to suffer. That's all you want from me.
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stupidxgirl
A Devoted Distraction
So You Sailed Away...
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Post by stupidxgirl on Mar 2, 2006 16:52:07 GMT -6
I can relate to this, so that's what makes it more enjoyable to read I think. It wasn't the best, but it was still emotional, and I enjoyed it. Nice job.
Bren
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Post by xxrebel86xx on Mar 2, 2006 17:00:51 GMT -6
thanks <3ember
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Post by Laura on Mar 2, 2006 17:16:56 GMT -6
I actually think this is one of your better ones. The way you wrote it made the voice of it. It sounded disappointed, upset ... that's what makes me like a poem - when I can hear it's voice.
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