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Feb 28, 2006 19:50:40 GMT -6
Post by xxrebel86xx on Feb 28, 2006 19:50:40 GMT -6
I often feel broken, Like I'm misshapen. These people around me, Aren't who I thought that they would be. I have cried before, But it wasn't over a break-up, It was about friend. And I soon gave-up. You stood there, Holding on to my heart, Squeezing it like nothing ever mattered. I wanna be in-love, I wanna have friends, But if this tends to get in the way, Then I'm already shattered on the floor. Broken into pieces, This is what you wanted from me.
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Mar 1, 2006 16:32:24 GMT -6
Post by QueenPaige4 on Mar 1, 2006 16:32:24 GMT -6
wow......that was incrediable....*claps* It almost made me cry
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Mar 2, 2006 17:38:03 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Mar 2, 2006 17:38:03 GMT -6
It seems like you're trying to put more than one poem in here ... like many chains of thoughts that don't link together. Spelling and grammar errors too, be sure to read over before posting or even if you post, read it then and modify. I just didn't get it because it seemed to be all mashed into one short poem.
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