Ever how is what

[grifter]

Ever how is what
or whom
that hardly hardens
of course
across every hour's
(left lately behind)
muttering much
nimbly
while numb noses
thumbing thinly
as clean hands
crisply clasping
what’s for
are always
haphazardly happy
like plump
puppies
done with petting
pawing a snake’s at
cause under those
coils are knowing
and inwards
the myths
mesmerizing

[Laura]

"done with petting
pawing a snake’s at
cause under those
coils are knowing
and inwards
the myths
mesmerizing"

--I really loved the ending. It's a bit confusing ... I had to reread it and I still don't think I get the entire thing. Ah well.

[thecrazybeautiful]

I have to agree it was a bit confusing, but not really in a bad way. I dunno.

[Absinthe]

It was a tad bit confusing....hard to follow, but then again I am surviving on about an hours worth of sleep in over a week, so I could easily be the problem here. It was interesting none-the-less.