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Falling
Feb 14, 2006 17:42:27 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Feb 14, 2006 17:42:27 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Yeah, I was kind of just messing around, pretending to be a rapper ('cuz I am oh so ghetto.....lol) and started just spewing out random things, then this came out and I actually sort of liked it, so here it is........
Falling
"Going like, flowing like blood from a broken heart." And the wound just opens up wider 'till it swallows the world whole into a pit of exhasperation. And the emotion is swirlin' and twirlin' A whirlwind of thoughts and regrets and there's no way to get out And tryin' to hide And tryin' to run is about as effective as shooting the sun. So you're trapped in this chaos You're stuck, no escape Maybe Superman'll save you with his strength and his cape. Hope the pit don't have.....
kryptonite
.......or Superman's toast And there goes the savior that you needed most.[/glow]
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Falling
Feb 14, 2006 17:55:08 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Feb 14, 2006 17:55:08 GMT -6
The ending was really effective and this: " And tryin' to hide And tryin' to run is about as effective as shooting the sun." --was excellent. I'd like to hear you rapping it, haha. Interesting. It's good to try new things though, isn't it? It's fun
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Falling
Feb 15, 2006 16:53:08 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Feb 15, 2006 16:53:08 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Okay, Laura, you wanted to hear me rapping it.....lol. Warning you that I am no rapper. I am just about the whitest white girl you could ever meet...haha. Anyway, here goes...... media.putfile.com/Rap-Attemptlol [/glow]
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Falling
Feb 16, 2006 11:19:30 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Feb 16, 2006 11:19:30 GMT -6
Haha ... that's great. Something you have to keep for years later and you can look back.
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Falling
Jul 4, 2006 22:52:47 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Jul 4, 2006 22:52:47 GMT -6
lol. omg. that is sweet. I listened to you rapping it after i read it and I must say you did an awesome job at keeping it rap. It sort of reminded me of the part in waterfalls by TLC where left eye is jammin it. lol. love it.
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Falling
Jul 11, 2006 6:54:25 GMT -6
Post by thecrazybeautiful on Jul 11, 2006 6:54:25 GMT -6
I like this. It's the coolest rap I've ever seen, ha. I really like what it's saying.
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