What Can't I Say?

[xxrebel86xx]

What can't I say?
When I feel this way,
The feeling's all gone,
There's no more to say.

I can't hide my life,
Under the stone,
That you've left me with.

Remembering the day,
You stepped right in,
Stealing my heart,
And also my life.

What Can't I say?
When my life's a mess,
The feelings all wrong,
I can't change the past.

[Only Me]

Well, this is a good piece, and I am assuming you are new. I come online every few days or more and update the indexes, if I ever miss a piece or if I already have and you notice it please send me a message and I will fix it as soon as I can.

I really like the ending of this piece... "I can't change the past" Its a good thing to know that you can't change what has already occurred but you can make it into part of your future by learning from it instead. Simply stated... but it works

[Laura]

I liked how the second stanza only had three lines instead of four like the others. Can't change the past ... yeah, so true.

[thecrazybeautiful]

"I can't hide my life,
Under the stone,
That you've left me with."

I liked that part.

[QueenPaige4]

that was a very good piece jenny...i liked the last line also

[xxrebel86xx]

thanks paigessssss