Revolution Deathsquad

[The Brutal Immortal]

On a Revolution to change the world,
Not at gunpoint, instead at sword,
Pain rushing from our razor blades,
Step back or your fate will be the same,
One fatality after the next,
Helping the world with mercy death,
We slice and dice and slit their throats,
We are known by actions not by face,
Fear the Revolution Deathsquad

[QueenPaige4]

Very nice. It was an interesting short poem. I liked it. -thumbs up-

[nina]

Me too. I liked the rhythm of it. Nicey nice!!!!!

[Isabela]

I liked that it kinda gave me an image when I read it. I like it!