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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Feb 5, 2006 13:18:43 GMT -6
I wrote this one a long time ago, but I really hate the title. I don't know why I've stuck with it for so long.
The World I Call Home
How did I get involved In this world of mindless writers, Pouring out heart and soul Out on to a piece of paper? Is this the life of the undiscovered, And those who are patiently waiting?
This is where I belong, Yet I feel disconnected To the world I once knew.
Have I come too far to turn back, Or will I even be able to make that choice on my own?
The pen only knows, And the keys under my fingers Are slaves to my every thought. Still my head churns each day From the passing of the sun, To the coming of the stars.
And is it possible to feel whole, living like this?
I can only sit back and watch As people soak up my dreams, Foolish words boiling at the tips of their tongues. And they spit out their life For everyone to have a share.
[But what if I don't want to share?]
I'm often distracted trying To make things fit into each other, As if everything was once connected. As if we could ever be, And as if... my dreams aren't already far enough away.
[I wonder if I fell one day Only to stand to a world of mystery, And hopeless, hopeless romantics.]
Maybe home is where the heart is, But what if it's in the mind?
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Post by Laura on Feb 6, 2006 15:50:12 GMT -6
A personal thing I have is I don't actually like when poems end in questions ... I don't know why.
The idea I got from this was being a writer ... is it really for you and have you ventured so far into it that you can't get out? I wrote a poem like that under Life called the Poet. I often wonder too because I don't think I can get out of it and the idea of not sharing, not wanting people to know the thoughts ... it's interesting. I have to go to dinner ... I may come back and revise this.
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Post by Only Me on Feb 9, 2006 0:00:18 GMT -6
... this whole poem seems to be a big question. I like how it ends in a question because its like the poem is asking a question that in the end you still are unable to answer... I really enjoyed it!
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