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Post by Laura on Jan 30, 2006 19:29:45 GMT -6
a/n: I am writing this as I type ... it's what the title says, complete spontaneous burst of writing. Let's see what my mind can do for you guys without revising, etc.
Non-Calculated Spontaneous Ramble
as I fit into your palm I wonder dream of silk oceans spreading a virus across your chest just a love potion, an equation, really hex you, hex me, we'd be hexed together then we could be involved and catastrophic, all those words wrapping around our tongues waving our hands in the clouds screaming I've found spontaneous love
oh how it was used on me enough this predetermined solution
like the water I felt salted left out of the decisions, floating my legs weightless on a bodied shoreline wait for that shark to come drink some blood from my love, love, you never came to me not like the great white sneering gearing his eyes like headlights on a deer I wish I could scream watch out, watch out doe
he's about to hit me. not violence, not physical emotional non-calculated mind frequence
tip toe, drawing lines across your cheeks black inked little fingerprints leading me to your lips I'll crawl inside your mouth and stay put jump on your tongue then slide down to your lungs and remember what it feels like to fall
spontaneously in love.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Feb 5, 2006 12:59:10 GMT -6
Ooh, wow. It's really good for just making it up on the spot.
I don't even think I can describe how much I like it.
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Post by Only Me on Feb 9, 2006 0:08:40 GMT -6
wow. that is good for not editing and writing it on the spot like that. good work!
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