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Post by The Brutal Immortal on Jun 1, 2008 21:17:49 GMT -6
Can you say you love me? Can you say you care? Can you say a smile for me, Was ever really there?
I can tell you hate me, It's written in your eyes, So why say you love me, Along with the other lies?
I kno that you weren't faithful, That you slept with all my friends, So here is my message to you, And all your fucking sins:
You kno i meant just what I said, Every time i said "I love you," But now you can see the remains, Of the heart you brutally slew...
I warn you not to be afraid, When you see the blood, Just might as well get used to it, For soon there will be a flood...
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jun 5, 2008 17:40:45 GMT -6
Wow, that is so powerful and so beautiful. I absolutely loved it. My two favorite verses were the second one and the last one. I loved it. Keep writing.
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