Lonely; I am

[QueenPaige4]

I'm all alone
Why doesn't anyone hear me?
Why don't they care?
I'm all alone
I hate this feeling
I can't take it anymore

I'm all alone
It's not the same without you
I just want to be "okay"

I'm all alone
Nothing is right
Everythings a mess
No one is around me
I can't take it anymore

Why can't they see that?
Why don't they care?
Why am I wishing you were here?
It's because I'm all alone and I hate it

I can't take it anymore
I'm hugging myself tightly
trying to stop myself from breaking but it's not working
I keep failing
I keep falling

When I hit the bottom
That's when I break into a puzzle
No one can put me together
No one will even try
They tell me I'm a lost cause
And that I did this to myself
I'm all alone

No one is around wishing I was theirs
Don't they see that I'd give them the world?
I'd let them in
and do what ever they want
As long as I'm not alone

I just want to be loved
to be held
to be cared about
to be all that they think about

I want the one for me
my Prince Charming
my knight in shining armor
my Edward, the love of my life
my everything, my world

And I just want to be the girl
his Cinderella, his dame
His Bella, his everything
his world and his love of his life
Is that too much to ask for?

[Cullen]

It seems pretty good, i think some stanza breaks could strengthen it though.

[QueenPaige4]

Stanza breaks aren't really my style. but thanks