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Post by Absinthe on Apr 30, 2008 19:03:56 GMT -6
wrapping up inside myself the things that make me so afriad of who i could possibly be. i'm hidden within these layers of sarcasm and apathy. i care beyond what shows. i'm lost beyond these roads i've traveled too many times before. these masochistic moments of curling in, breaking down, tearing away these barriers, baby i like the pain. it reminds me i'm still breathing in the poisons in this air blackening my lungs; i love the burn of asthmatic bronchioles suffering. the wretched agony of broken coronary organs, the pumping rhythmically disrupted. it helps to know i bleed the same red i always did and always will i hope. i just need the pain to thrive and survive to keep believing its real pinch me, i think i'm dreaming this life i never wanted is like a nightmare i cant wake from this dying body falters with attempts to move the pain is a reanimating force bruise me in rememberance, cut me in advance we're waging wars - humanity against devilry dress our wounds with tourniquets of faith why not let 'em bleed? the dripping crimson rivers reminding of teardrop sensations of emotions. baby, i might be a masochist but this damned pain keeps me going
This actually started from the oneword.com word of the day "hidden". Then I just kept writing after the 60 seconds and this is what came out. I didn't really think, I just wrote, so it isnt quite as organized as some might prefer, but whatever. It's raw
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Post by QueenPaige4 on May 1, 2008 14:38:41 GMT -6
That is amazing. I love it.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 1, 2008 16:25:31 GMT -6
I really like how this is structured (or, unstructured?). And your word/image choice was rather good.
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