Clear Glass Eyes

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300] I just kind of scribbled this down in my sketchbook earlier today. I have been practicing drawing eyes lately and this just kind of popped into my head........


Observations of transgressions
burn retinas, breaking dreams
injured pride with
miniscule excuses of innocence
rotten figments of imagination
embedded in memory
pick apart the pieces
and see through clear glass eyes


....short, but eh......first I've written in a while. What do you think?[/glow]

[Laura]

No I liked this. Yes it's short but it's good, especially after you've been rusty since you say you haven't written in a while. I like the idea. The whole concept of eyes and what lies behind them ... some say they are the window to your soul. Eh, I'm not sure what my beliefs are on that ... but this was a good "eye" opener. Yes, that was lame. I'm tired!

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300] Lol....yes, a tad bit lame.....but thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Coming off off writers block is definitely like rising after a really bad crash....feels good. [/glow]

[Laura]

Yes, I know. I had terrible writer's block for a couple of days. Not saying that what I've been writing is good - just saying, at least I can think of some ideas!

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300] Bad writing is better than no writing....thats my saying. The only catch is that the bad stuff gets locked away so no one else can see the embarrassment....lol.[/glow]

[Laura]

Haha, yes I know what you mean. Or scrumpled and on its way to the dump.

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300] Haha....yes, exactly....the bad stuff gets used to start camp fires. [/glow]

[QueenPaige4]

I agree with you both. anyway it was a very good short piece. i liked it.

[Only Me]

bad writing is what I feel is best to share and get ideas on how to improve it... but I never do post writings after I have had a bad case of writers block... It usually turns out like the piece I wrote in my class the other day... but I posted that one cause even though its awful I like it