Post by darkstar17 on May 9, 2005 12:47:41 GMT -6
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as i sit and ponder, about my life and my woes, i look at the world, covered in fallen snow. the doves of the morn, coo as i lay. on the frozen valley, on this cold winter's day. i close my eyes, and think of the shame. this world has on life, think that it is a game? the young die early, the old die late. all the other's are waiting at the gate. then i feel a pain, as my wings seem to heal. the pain is unbearing and almost too real. then i see the world, falling into abiss. oddly enough, seems like people are in bliss. then i wake up and look out my window, what do i see? the doves and the fallen snow.
this is just a little thing i do to keep meself occupied, if you like it please write that you do, but if you dont, then oh well... thats life.[/glow]
as i sit and ponder, about my life and my woes, i look at the world, covered in fallen snow. the doves of the morn, coo as i lay. on the frozen valley, on this cold winter's day. i close my eyes, and think of the shame. this world has on life, think that it is a game? the young die early, the old die late. all the other's are waiting at the gate. then i feel a pain, as my wings seem to heal. the pain is unbearing and almost too real. then i see the world, falling into abiss. oddly enough, seems like people are in bliss. then i wake up and look out my window, what do i see? the doves and the fallen snow.
this is just a little thing i do to keep meself occupied, if you like it please write that you do, but if you dont, then oh well... thats life.[/glow]
my only suggestion is, you may want to put this in a format. unless you were aiming for a more prose type of thing you can post this in the stories/prose section. thank you again, and hey if you get a chance please introduce yourself in the "Introduce Yourself" message board. 
