grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Nov 20, 2005 19:43:43 GMT -6
within congealed maybe's introverted intuition survives a sigh eating blueberries waiting to lick our attention and leave fake bruises purpling the chrome between our eyes with juicy staring ghosts longing to empty flavored kisses along the old voice of our flesh we hope it chokes on creamy sweet cheek fulls
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Post by Laura on Nov 20, 2005 19:45:39 GMT -6
This is definitely a favourite of mine by you. This part:
"eating blueberries waiting to lick our attention and leave fake bruises purpling the chrome between our eyes with juicy staring ghosts longing to empty flavored kisses"
--was just a pleasure to read. Also, from the staring ghosts line to the end, the imagery was incredible.
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 26, 2005 0:25:02 GMT -6
very imaginative i could never have come up w/ something like this, nice work
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Post by Only Me on Jul 5, 2006 0:08:33 GMT -6
"waiting to lick our attention and leave fake bruises" I found these lines almost hilarious. in the irony they represent to me.
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