For Kristy

[grifter]

lightning lizards sizzle
in the melancholy drizzle
of my noon day sun
how they run, how they run
across the sands, lost in fun
as they crackle and they spark
in the deserts of my heart
neath the dunes as they scheme
eating violet electric dreams
that they sting, while they sing
of involuntary things
it's such a lonely lullaby
for my hyper butterflies
as they flutter and they stutter
while they mutter neath the thunder
in the summer of my slumber
where you wait for me alone

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300] Oh, I really like that. The rhyme scheme was perfect and didn't seem at all forced.

"that they sting, while they sing
of involuntary things
it's such a lonely lullaby
for my hyper butterflies"

.......I liked that part most. Great job.[/glow]

[Laura]

"as they crackle and they spark
in the deserts of my heart
neath the dunes as they scheme
eating violet electric dreams"

and the ending were just superb. I honestly wish I could rhyme like you. You have excellent word choice, as always.

[grifter]

Thank you both for your kind words
i have a crush on someone right now and i needed to express those feelings and they finally turned into this last night
sweetpearl-- i don't know if you've heard of the myers-briggs personality test, but my personality type is INFP- introverted using intuition and feeling as my primary modes of gathering and judging information. InFp's have a difficult time expressing their feelings verbaly, but we have an easy time expressing them in writing, we also think abstractly and are drawn to words that rhyme, so many infp's are poets. i love simple words and their sounds

[Laura]

I have taken a personality test but I'm unsure of which one it was. That's neat though. Ooh a crush! What are you going to do about this?

[grifter]

we are suppose to go se saw 2 together tonight at the movies--- i am excited and nervous at the same time

[Laura]

That's awesome. I wish I had a crush ... but I am a hermit except when I go to work with people that are all way older than me. Humph! I'm rambling.

[Only Me]

i like how the rhyming is so subtle. its like you know its ryhming as you read it but its not forced or obvious.