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grifter
A Devoted Distraction

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melting mirror smile Oct 28, 2005 23:54:15 GMT -6

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Post by grifter on Oct 28, 2005 23:54:15 GMT -6

i am your reflection
melting mirror smile
losing our direction
laughing with a child

hold me in your silver
mirror melting smile
drowning in my fever
nodding all the while

you are my reflection
melting mirror smile
making our correction
downward spinning sigh

Last Edit: Oct 28, 2005 23:54:45 GMT -6 by grifter

Laura A Devoted Official Serene Distraction I am the shoreline but you're the sea Posts: 3,282	melting mirror smile Oct 29, 2005 16:06:49 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Laura on Oct 29, 2005 16:06:49 GMT -6 "hold me in your silver mirror melting smile drowning in my fever nodding all the while" --favourite part. It's short but it's nice. It's not my favourite from you but it was still a nice read.

Sharon Administrator Posts: 4,932	melting mirror smile Dec 16, 2005 17:31:48 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Dec 16, 2005 17:31:48 GMT -6 [glow=purple,2,300]i liked that, not sure if it's the appropriate term but i found it.. CUTE hehe nice job [/glow]

Only Me An Official Serene Distraction Who I become depends on how you treat who I am... Posts: 1,722	melting mirror smile Jul 4, 2006 23:58:23 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Only Me on Jul 4, 2006 23:58:23 GMT -6 it holds you with the first line until the last line. nice.
	The world is a cruel place, but turning against it only gives it the strength to hurt you more.

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