sounds & feelings

[grifter]

For the Rhyme
the seed of weirding tries
to root itself in time
so there are many reasons for its lies
but the lemon and the lime
are very hard to find
and there seems to be no reason for the rhyme
for the rhyme
it suffers every season
showing passion in the lesions
but there seems to be no reason for the rhyme
kind eyes are oft aimed high
to ponder at the sky
and live a life of only wondering why
count blinks untill you cry
twelve before you die
and there seems to be no reason for the rhyme
for the rhyme
it suffers every season
showing passion in the lesions
but there seems to be no reason for the rhyme

Mercury Carry my Words
Mercury carry my words
let this life not end in Icarian flight
my melted wings
will not be molded to prop up
the stolen Gods of Adam's King
speed my messenger
haste made not in anger
but in celebration
for we waste no wishes on tired djinns
slumping in molded urns
cry again scream my friend
let muscles break and then
leave light behind thy wind
burn past stars and suns
urge the universe to bend
in a neverending run
and an everlasting race to comprehend

Stars of Gleaming Restless Feeling
daunting glimmering glistening rippling
stars of gleaming restless feelings
go a topsy-turvy tripping
over streaming souls a seeming
like the darling dew a dripping
on the dawn of day that's dreaming
of more midnight twilight breathing

aphotic hollow hellish dreary
holes of bleary bleak believing
drift in discord wanton weary
nearing a narrow banal being
as they linger longing leery
on the dawn of day that's dreaming
of more midnight twilight breathing

The Bellicose Behemoth
The bellicose behemoth,
behaving quite bereaved,
bedevils bogus beatific beasties
by bawling bawdly.
Basicly the billigerent bellows
briskly bathe the breeze,
bringing brutish brazen braggarts
to buckle bend and bleed.
Blinding boorish bombastic bon vivants,
bashing their barefaced breeds.
But though i not be blameless,
be not i besieged.
The bellicose behemoth
barely bothers me.

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aural arousal assures
ascending bruises blurred
by buying broken babydolls to burn

and azure aromas assume
asymetrical bothersome blues
by borrowing bright bacteria to bloom

and ample arachnids assign
acceptable bareable blight
by barely bringing beggars by to blind

within my mind
the timing of the rhymes
trickle up my spine
creating playful havoc within my mind
ice-cicles and your dimples
ripple in the lines
crimple 'tween the sickly simple
words within my mind
causing cells to fire
rapid in their choir
tickling sanity till its a liar
sad stability erased
by rhythm rhyme and pace
an echoic state of grace
is left within it's place
an aural twist of fate
replacing all self hate
drifting in the space
within my mind

[elmarie]

o wow. i didnt unerstand the rhyme one, but i liked stars of gleaming restless feeling.
ttyl
el marie

[grifter]

el marie-
for the rhyme- for me is a representation
of our need to make sense of the world
i read a story about a scientist/astronomer who was put to death because of his work/ he was beheaded/ he asked if his assistant could be present/ he told his assistant that when the blade fell that he would blink as many times as he could before he lost consciousness/ it was his last experiment/ he was still trying to understand, to add knowlegde to the world/ that's what i was thinking when i wrote that one

[allmeheart]

you seem to write w/ alliteration in mind, gives it a twist that i like, if u were to read these aloud you may have a tongue twister though

[Only Me]

I think reading it aloud would help with the emphasis on certain things...

[thecrazybeautiful]

I really like that first one. I don't even really know why, but it reads so well.

They're all nice though. Your alliterations are always nice.

[stupidxgirl]

I must say, the first one wasn't my favorite until I read your explination for it. I thought that alone made it incredible. Also these lines really stuck out to me from 'Mercury Carry my Words'

'my melted wings
will not be molded to prop up
the stolen Gods of Adam's King'

It's the melted wings part I think, I've never thought to describe them like that. It's a nice image.