grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Mar 26, 2006 16:15:34 GMT -6
Knowing without knowing Knowing without knowing (is Knowing around corners) is beauty breaths ever so automatic from buckets (of wishing wells) now helmets without eyes; once dream. dippers dividing Life from house painting. connecting-Art- with-circulation i will still drop railroaded quarters and disinterested dimes do you?
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Post by Laura on Mar 26, 2006 17:44:11 GMT -6
These are some new formats we're seeing from you and different styles ... I like it. This:
"i will still drop railroaded quarters and disinterested dimes"
--was my favourite part. I'm not sure why but just the wording and the thought of disinterested money intrigues me. I'm actually unsure what this poem is about though.
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grifter
A Devoted Distraction
Posts: 135
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Post by grifter on Mar 26, 2006 18:42:34 GMT -6
ok my 2nd attempt at drawing a poem Knowing without knowing, the capitalization is important, the big K stands for intuition, and the little k is for logical scientific method thinking, intuition is like unconscious knowledge, it will often give you a heads up in interpreting a situation, it is less valued in our society, but i think equally as important as logic, i use my intuition to write or paint, to create art, cummings said that art is alive, and that it has largeness, and i imagine all people are artists, and we enjoy creating and imagining, when we are children at the very least, but culture and society, and civilization change us (helmets without eyes), so then the wishing well references, i love wishing wells, love to throw money in always have, but some people won't, they would rather have that quarter or dime, i don't value money as much as most, other than what is forced on me for survival, so some people won't give up thoes quarters, and others would give me a dime to throw in, but with no intrest in wishes, one last link, look at the words connected by the d in dippers and the w in with, i dream. i put the period after dream to create that tiny sentence, and then there is a tiny question at the end, that asks, if you throw money for wishes (which means do you also create art?), but it also fits like this. i dream. do you? do you imagine wishes in that bucket or do you use it to cover your head and step in line...i guess thats the quick way to say it
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Post by Laura on Mar 26, 2006 18:55:07 GMT -6
Ack, I'm not that knowledgeable! You sure are interesting though.
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grifter
A Devoted Distraction
Posts: 135
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Post by grifter on Mar 26, 2006 19:02:48 GMT -6
i am just introverted, drawn to metaphor, and i am idealistic, i am interested in people, both on the individual level, and in the whole of humanity, i just like to write as well.....
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Post by Laura on Mar 26, 2006 19:11:24 GMT -6
I know
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Mar 29, 2006 13:24:37 GMT -6
Wow. I like this.
The thoughts it brings...
Wow. I really like the format of this one to.
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Post by Only Me on Jul 5, 2006 0:06:22 GMT -6
I really like how you format most of your work, it almost keeps the reader in a trance.
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