Dont know where to put it but here looks good

[Samccaleb]

Warriors Prayer

I pray to all the gods above,
Guard me in my dangerous journeys.
I ask that you teach me well,
The lessons I must learn,
To live my life.
Keep me warm when I have no fire.
Let those I care for,
Know I am safe.
Stand between me and evil,
In all the dark places I must walk.
Keep my sword at the ready,
Even when I no longer have the strength to draw it.
Hold my shield in place,
So that I might live to fight another day.
Let me not be vanquished by my enemies,
And should there be a way,
Let peace begin anew.

[Samccaleb]

Ok this poem is like a sequel to the one above so here it is

The Battle

A sword flashes against the sky.
It is stained with blood.
Another enemy has been vanquished.
The ground is covered with opposers,
And with fallen comrades.
Come soldiers we must carry our brothers,
For they shall be buried as hero's and kings.
All our friends shall go to Elysium this day,
They have earned their places well.

[Only Me]

wow touching... truly...

[Samccaleb]

thank you.....i watched gladiator one too many times and got inspired...lol

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]i loved that movie! ;D good stuff [/glow]

[Laura]

I really liked this line:

"Keep me warm when I have no fire"

[Samccaleb]

thank you

[allmeheart]

great job, both were wonderful