the worrior soul

[tommy]

[glow=red,2,300]The warrior soul[/glow]

The silent felt feelings of the warrior soul
Battling against the oppression of the tyrannical state of mind
Learning to observe and behold
The obsessions of that state of mind
The wickedness of good intentions
Meant to help, but hinder the roles
Trying to be portrayed by that warrior soul

If words are weapons
Then death spouts from the mouth of every one
The innocent act of being you
The stabbing attack of a word miss placed
The fear and damage done
Feeling silent screams of defeat in the very centre of the war
The battle against freedom of speech and the warrior soul

If the soul is eternal
Then so shall be the hate of mankind
As hate has roots in the soul of evil
And we are supposed to stand by and watch
To observe the evil, and ignore the sublime
The good souls of others around you are washed away
Image destroyed by a single bad thing
But no more, I’ll love the good soul, let the beacon of love shine

We bid fare well to the warrior soul
No longer fighting for the good of the world
Feeling lost in a place of ill feeling
Died in the anguish of the righteous
At the pleasure of the evil flow
The flow of disgust against the good of all good people
It is the soulless soul of the world

[Absinthe]

tommy said:

If the soul is eternal
Then so shall be the hate of mankind
As hate has roots in the soul of evil
And we are supposed to stand by and watch
To observe the evil, and ignore the sublime

That part definitely jumped out at me. This was a great piece. Keep up the excellent work

[allmeheart]

i loved it, it flowed, well done, good wording and topic