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Post by Only Me on Aug 28, 2005 0:00:20 GMT -6
I am not sure where this came from but one day I was bored and thinking about life in general... and this is what came out of it...  Suicide Homicide Murder either way Killings Dealings Each time someone must pay Your life My life Each to his own they say Suicide Homicide Catch me another day |
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Post by Absinthe on Aug 28, 2005 0:01:20 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Short, but poignant. Intriguing, I say. Great job. In just a few short lines, you provoke so many questions and reactions.[/glow]
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Post by Sharon on Aug 31, 2005 15:23:19 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]i agree with Absinthe, short lines indeed, it's nothing we all have never heard before but you delivered it quite uniquely. good job.[/glow]
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 10, 2005 19:45:15 GMT -6
I like it...Its something that I have thought aout before as well but could never put into words quite like that.
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Post by Laura on Nov 21, 2005 11:27:56 GMT -6
I like short lines. I liked the idea of this. Good job.
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 26, 2005 0:23:52 GMT -6
short n sweet with plenty of meaning behind it, nice work
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Post by Only Me on Nov 28, 2005 19:28:21 GMT -6
lol thanks ya'll for your words |
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