Discrimating Society

[Angelamongsociety]

I hear the voises down the hall.
"Hey white girl" They call out.
But my color isn't all i'm about.
I wish there was some way I could make them see.
Why can't they just let me be.
God made us alike and yet we still fight.
Look at what our society has done!
It has taught us to hate everyone.

[Sharon]

The message portrayed here is very true. Thank you for sharing

[charleyveggiequeen]

That poem is very true and it makes you think dont it?

[allmeheart]

the meaning of the poem i like very much, its a good topic to write about, i think this poem is very creative, and I like it, I would proof read and maybe make it longer if I was gonna' improve

[Absinthe]

Its a bit short, but you definitely get your point across.It actually reminds me of the Black Eyed Peas song "Where is the Love?". If you haven't heard it, its an excellent song. Anyway, you specifically reminded me of this set of lyrics:

"But if you only have love for your own race
Then you only leave space to discriminate
And to discriminate only generates hate"

You have a great message in your poem and its one that many people are trying to get across, but hate still remains and descrimination and racism will always be prevelant, whether we like it or not.

It's like my Pastor at church always says "Nothing is more difficult to erradicate than unintelligent prejudice"

Excellent job with this, though I would suggest running it through spell-check and such.

[Laura]

Although I can't fully agree with the poem (I don't believe in god) ... I do think this is very true. It's a little short, but I think if you expanded it, it wouldn't hold the same effect.

[Only Me]

short sweet and gets the point across... I totally agree with this poem...