xxdarkxangelxx
Contently A Distraction
Love me for who I am not who I've become
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Post by xxdarkxangelxx on Aug 2, 2005 12:27:48 GMT -6
They tell her they love her every day. Shetler her from the outside world. They tell her that everything will be okay. Keeping her from what's real and what's fake. She feels the need to leave it behind. Not knowing she'll miss them and their once upon a times. Sometimes I wonder where she is. And if they have realized their mistake. Lying to their child and leaving her to find out on her own. I hope she remembers the times that were great. Now happy and forgiving the ones she forsake.
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Post by Absinthe on Aug 3, 2005 20:20:48 GMT -6
Its a good poem, jut difficult to read in this set-up.
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 24, 2005 20:11:25 GMT -6
good poem, suggestion would be to write it in a more poetic format instead of in a paragraph like form
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xxdarkxangelxx
Contently A Distraction
Love me for who I am not who I've become
Posts: 30
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Post by xxdarkxangelxx on Dec 2, 2005 16:51:59 GMT -6
yeah yeah, i just copied it from what was already in my computer. im lazy so i dont feel like retyping it. srry.
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Post by Only Me on Dec 4, 2005 1:04:21 GMT -6
great work! yea the format is a bit difficult...
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Post by Sharon on Dec 16, 2005 17:18:27 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]this poem still needs to be revised but it's a good poem, i haven't seen you around here much nowadays, i hope to see you return soon.[/glow]
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