what do u do

[sihkemojuggalette]

What do you do?

What do you when your all alone,

When you have noone?

What do you do when noone cares,

When the world has turned its back on you?

What do you when you are to scared to be yourself,

When you cant even bear to look at yourself?

What do you do when you cant trust anyone,

Not even yourself?

Do you smile and bear it or do you let it all go?

What do you do if you have noone,

Not even yourself?

When tears just arent enough anymore,

When you have to go deeper?

What do you do when you have took all you can take,

Do you end it and and have people think your selfish,

Or do you try or get help?

What do you do when help doesnt help,

When you are so numb it sounds like the wind and feels like breathing?

What do you do when you cant breathe until it falls,

Do you stay or do you go?

What Do You Do??

[Angelamongsociety]

aaaawww i really like this poem Jessica! It's SO emo but I love you though! lol

[thecrazybeautiful]

Some good lines in this.

"When tears just arent enough anymore,

When you have to go deeper?"

I think I'm liking that part more because of what I thought it said when I first read it. I thought it said 'when do you have to go deeper?" and I was thinking "That's a good question."

"What do you do when help doesnt help,

When you are so numb it sounds like the wind and feels like breathing?"

And I like those two lines alot.

All in all I think it could have come together alot better, but you could always work at it. Or keep it the way you like it, it's your poem.

[BlueMoon]

I think the lines that I like the most are:
"What do you do when you have took all you can take,
Do you end it and and have people think your selfish,
Or do you try or get help?"

I guess partly because I personally relate. But overall with this I thought it was nice how the whole thing was questions. Nice job.