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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jan 25, 2008 16:18:13 GMT -6
It's such a shame you ran away I never knew a coward quite like you Why are you so afraid? It's about the time I start hurting myself so you don't have to And the funny thing is; I was telling Eryc you were ignoring me and that you were most likely going to leave me And so you have You've left me stranded, forgotten, abandoned.
It reminds me of the part in New Moon When Edward leaves Bella But they got back together Only because they truely were meant to be And Bella never gave up. You are Edward, the one who walked away I am Bella, the one who patiently awaits your return
My darling, you told me that if I told you my feelings it wouldn't blow up in my face And I hate to break it to you but it did You dumping me after I spilled my guts Was in fact blowing up in my face
And I want to sing random songs in your ear Not love songs, more like thanks for hurting me but I still love you songs Yet, you've ran away Hinting a return Promising the return Yet not returning just yet.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Jan 26, 2008 15:01:31 GMT -6
"And I want to sing random songs in your ear Not love songs, more like thanks for hurting me but I still love you songs" Heehee, those lines made me smile
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jan 26, 2008 15:06:06 GMT -6
Thanks, I think.
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Post by The Brutal Immortal on Jan 27, 2008 22:11:10 GMT -6
thats a kool poem... i like it... i like how you referred to another source (i really like that series, especially Eclipse, it made me laugh)... there were a few parts that seemed a bit forced out... but all in all a good poem, 4.5 of 5
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jan 28, 2008 15:02:12 GMT -6
Thanks
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nina
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by nina on Feb 10, 2008 12:32:55 GMT -6
I like this poem aswell! It sort of has a sense of hope, forgiveness, and longing. I liked the reference to New Moon. I am totally in love with the Twilight series.
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Post by Isabela on Feb 10, 2008 13:17:50 GMT -6
Yeah I enjoyed the poem, lots of emotion spilling out from it.
'Hinting a return Promising the return Yet not returning just yet.'
I liked the last 3 sentences, it's hope, hope and hope. Great work.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Feb 19, 2008 11:22:56 GMT -6
Thank you
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