Sounds of Knowledge

[Cullen]

Okay I've seen it done once before but that was Sir Walter Raligieh and some other DWEM but i thought i'd try it. I would write a response to a poem. I picked at random a poem, it was "Images of Uncertainty" by Lady Penguin
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And here is the reply:

Sounds of Knowledge
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Those times seemed to be forever.
Forget them? Never!
I hear reassurance, i hear life,
I had it all planned out all your strife,

The horrors, the pain i made you feel
How could you not believe it was real?
You waited for light, in hopes it help,
Remembering our time, pathetic whelp,

You quivered in fear and then you would wait
Hoping, it would come down to fate,
You wished to be timid and frail
Praying that in the end you'd not fail,

You saw me look? and still you sat?
After all 'twas curiosity that killed the cat.
You only stayed and continued to think,
Hoping in time my love wouldn't sink

You waited too long, it was plain to see
For now you know, you could've had me
'Tis true i felt love at the time you thought
But you waited too long, this brought distraught.
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[NotSoPerfect]

Very interesting. Rhymes = a little forced, but that's not uncommon. Definitely an interesting read, though.

[Cullen]

okay the rhymes were completely forced because i wanted to follow the scheme of the original