Final Chapter?

[Angelamongsociety]

In the begining of our story there was only you and I

Everything was damn near perfect, we both fell so fast

Looking though all our pictures and reminising all our memories it seems like a fairy tale

I still rememeber the way you held me in your arms and how you use to kiss me so sweetly

We would talk about our future for hours and I would laugh and giggle as you said every word that I wanted to hear

You took care of me, loved me and looked after me, I can't even explain how I felt just knowing you were there

We faught through alot together and always ended up stronger in the end

We have been apart for months now and I am not ready for us to say goodbye

So many words unspoken and so many things that I wish we could have done

Please don't give up on me, don't say this is the final chapter.

[thecrazybeautiful]

Ooh, I like this idea. The theme/story in this. Some minor things bugged me, but nothing too much.

[Sharon]

I think a little more usage of punctuation and revision would make a great difference in this piece. It was a nice read. Thanks!

[NotSoPerfect]

I didn't care for the length of the lines, but it was obviously a very emotional piece. Nice work.