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Post by Angelamongsociety on Aug 30, 2006 16:43:51 GMT -6
As I lay my head down on the pillow case just know that when I close my eyes it's you that is haunting my dreams.
And when I listen to some slow song, it's you that comes to my mind
Each time I look at the photographs I will know that the way your eyes sparkled when near me;is something I will never get back
I know you are already forgetting me but I will always remember you
Just know that when you need me, just call, I will be there waiting.
My heart still beats in a slow and unsteady rhythm .... just for you.
With every step I take, I'll remember how you promised me forever, everything that should have been, of how I messed it up.
I have learned my lesson the hardest way posible, never again will I take love for granted
Sometimes I'm sorry just isn't enough.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Sept 5, 2006 15:28:21 GMT -6
"Each time I look at the photographs I will know that the way your eyes sparkled when near me;is something I will never get back"
I liked that, but the rest almost seemed like a big contradiction. It talks about the person forgetting you, yet you say that they'll need you. And it almost kinda switches from a positive outlook to a negative one. I know it's 'sposed to be kinda sad, but it jumbles a bit of happiness in there which threw me off.
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