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Post by Angelamongsociety on May 22, 2006 4:46:56 GMT -6
If only I had been there talking to you instead of her, would you have gone out together?
And if only I hadn't intruduced the two of you, would you have ever met?
If only I had been a better girlfriend to you, would you still have left me?
And if only you had loved me, would I be sitting here pouring my eyes out because of you?
So many things I will never know or understand.
Like why I fell so hard for you and why I ever trusted in you.
Or what love really is and what it's like when someone actualy means it.
What would have happened if I hadn't wasted those two years with you?
Who's arms would I be in tonight if I had never known the fear of falling in love?
Where would I be if I had never felt your tender touch?
And the one question that I want to be answered above all.
If only I had never met you, would my heart have never been broken?
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 24, 2006 15:38:33 GMT -6
Ok, honestly, it doesn't seem much like a poem. Kinda just a series of words that you can read and know, but not really feel. I mean, sure your words describe a feeling, but it's just not that strong. I dunno, maybe try to extend more on the ideas.
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