Post by stupidxgirl on May 2, 2006 10:58:14 GMT -6
a/n: I'm not sure what to say about this. It's not exactly my greatest work LoL, in fact I don't really like it. It's a work in progress I guess, I think the ending needs more but my mind isn't working right now. Lemme know what you think please, if it's terrible just tell me and I wont put effort into fixing it LoL.
You were always right;
My message in a bottle
and my infantile hope that
it would reach your shore
like a hurricane,
rushing the waves and crashing
the wooden posts to your
Sunday beach home-
It would never be legible
by the time the water touched
the ink like running mascara
on those nights you made
me feel 10 sizes too small.
I'm a girl,
a simple minded
easily crushed
but never mend-able,
GIRL.
But you spun me until
my shoes slipped off and
I lost my will to let gravity
slow us down.
I wore my rose colored glasses
because seeing you for what
I always had to believe you were
was always so enjoyable
when the sun actually touched me
and I could touch you.
You're just a boy,
just a dirty
smudged up
idealistic view of a
BOY.
But things were different
then.
And I still send my message
on the waves of a hurricane.
You were always right;
My message in a bottle
and my infantile hope that
it would reach your shore
like a hurricane,
rushing the waves and crashing
the wooden posts to your
Sunday beach home-
It would never be legible
by the time the water touched
the ink like running mascara
on those nights you made
me feel 10 sizes too small.
I'm a girl,
a simple minded
easily crushed
but never mend-able,
GIRL.
But you spun me until
my shoes slipped off and
I lost my will to let gravity
slow us down.
I wore my rose colored glasses
because seeing you for what
I always had to believe you were
was always so enjoyable
when the sun actually touched me
and I could touch you.
You're just a boy,
just a dirty
smudged up
idealistic view of a
BOY.
But things were different
then.
And I still send my message
on the waves of a hurricane.
