How about a love lost?

[Samccaleb]

Sunrise On The Mountain

At the top of the mountain,
I watched the sun come up.
The rays of golden light,
Warm the earth.
Never have I seen such beauty.
Never have I felt such peace.
One regret mars my enjoyment of this place,
And it is that you cant be here with me.
You have chosen your own mountain,
From which to watch the sun rise,
And it is far from my own.

A love lost to differences perhaps....I kinda pulled this one out of thin air....or well never mind...thats not polite.

[Only Me]

i really love it... nice work

[Samccaleb]

thank you

[Only Me]

in your location... somewhere is spelled wrong ;)tee hee tee hee... *thinks to herself* "Maybe that was done on purpose" Then replies "Nah... S wouldn't do that " Responds with "OMG I am now officially crazy... I can't believe i just replied to my self" my these walls are hard... i miss my padded room... purple waves purple waves... purple waves.... purple waves...

[Samccaleb]

*rolls in the floor clutching sides* you're figgin hilarious......I'll fix it. Thanks.

[Laura]

I liked the beginning particularly this:

"The rays of golden light,
Warm the earth.
Never have I seen such beauty"

[Samccaleb]

Thank you

[allmeheart]

nice work, an equal amount of emotion and imagery was shown/used