Emotional Drought

[QueenPaige4]

My blood has finally dried
I no longer feel empty and lost inside
Wishing I couldn't feel
this drought inside of me
Knowing I can't cry
wishing I knew why
I feel this way about you
I have an itch inside
not out but I can't feel
I've gone numb
I can no longer feel pain
Wishing you felt this way
Wanting to take your pain
away or make it disappear
Knowing I can't and I know I won't
Maybe I will
can't I wait one more day
for you to finad a way to make me stay
What's my reason for living
What's my reson for loving you
Thinking I should stop
Stop loving you
Stop caring
Knowing I can't
Maybe next year I'll stop
What's my reason for stopping?
Do you have a reason for me?
Stop everything
Stop living and breathing
I've already stopped feeling
Feeling you
feeling me
Now I can't seem to see
the reason to cry or die
I'm so unbelieveably unhappy
But I can't feel
it's an emotional drought

[303e]

Good job!! 10/10

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]Emotional Drought.. also the title of a Chevelle song.[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]This was very well done. I like the fact that it rhymes, but in most places you don't really realize it.. it seems.. natural.. I think that's the right word.[/glow]

[BlueMoon]

Another deep poem. This kind of corresponds with what I said in your poem "Closed".

[Only Me]

Loved it... there were a few points were I could really connect with your message in this one... keep writing...

[allmeheart]

very nice, i loved it, only suggestion, go back and change "finad" to find, lol a simple typo

[QueenPaige4]

you guys are so great to me. i'm glad i joined this website. and I shall thank you all once more

[stupidxgirl]

I enjoyed this one very much actually. The emotion was definetly real here LoL. Great job. These lines stuck out to me the most.

"Wishing I couldn't feel
this drought inside of me
Knowing I can't cry
wishing I knew why
I feel this way about you
I have an itch inside
not out but I can't feel
I've gone numb"

I think it's because I relate to them more, but either way, wonderful job.

Bren