Still (To My best friend Jenny)

[QueenPaige4]

I wish I were dying, crying and bleeding
But I am, I'm scared of losing her again
but there she goes
she's walking away
I'll always love her no matter what
I just wish I wasn't invisible to her
I just wish she wasn't in love with a man
So I'm sitting here wishing for death to wash over me
but all that is coming down is the rain
And I can't stand the pain
Did she ever see the tears inside my eyes?
Did she ever wondered if I wanted to die
in front of her because i love her?
And she's making a big mistake
Not being with me and I sometimes wished she could see
See everything inside of me
because this is nothing but my feelings
this is nothing but a friendship with burning flames
this is nothing, is what she will always say
But I did love her and I still do
And it kills me to just be best friends with her
it kills me to see her go
it just kills me to even think of her
and I'm moving on or trying to anyway
and I'm happy but I still love her.

[Laura]

For some reason, I really couldn't get into the feeling of this poem. It's not a bad poem, I just didn't connect with it; even though I've lost friends ...

[QueenPaige4]

well, it's a kind of complicated story. And you wouldn't really get the feeling if you have never been in love with a girl before or if you weren't attracted to girls like i am.

[Laura]

No, but I've lost friends ... that's enough feeling for some of this poem because you do love your close friends. I know I can't relate any more than that though.

[Only Me]

I get it. I am not attracted to girls, but i can connect with this. awesome work!

[QueenPaige4]

thank you

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]well i may now know what it's like to be in that particular situation but i do know what it's like to want some one you can't have or rather, to be with some one you simply can't be with for personal or... obvious reasons. it's devastating - far from a good feeling that's for sure. anyway, i hope things have worked out.... or hopefully you've found a peace of mind and moved on. [/glow]

[QueenPaige4]

Sharon, I have moved on. She's my best friend plus she's like a little sister to me now. so yeah...those feelings are long gone.

[Carissa Marie]

I liked it... I could definitely feel your pain--even though I have never been in your situation, and I think that is what makes a piece well-written. Good job, and I hope everything works out for you.

[QueenPaige4]

thank you so much