stating the anamolous

[NotSoPerfect]

i suppose i shall post a few poems now...

"i'll call you then tomorrow
at 3:30 on the dot," you said.
tomorrow came and stayed and left
with no word of you
and no call from you
"i love you," is such an overstatement
but happily received
with careless dreams and ignorant sighs
and i'll believe the sky's not blue
if those are words that leave your lips
and this guitar means so much more
than any diamond ring
since you played it and gently muttered
my favorite overstatement
so please call me
3:30 passed three days ago.

[Sharon]

i liked how you delivered the text. i love it how you have the beginning of the poem connected to the last part, every thing seems to belong where every thing is, very nice. good job

[Angelamongsociety]

Yep! I have heard that line before. "I'll call you, I promise!" Keep up the good work!

[Zack]

Nicely done.

Somehow, it reminds me of poems of a slightly earlier era; although the subject matter is quite modern, the style reminds me of poetry from more around the 30s or 40s. Very cleverly written.

[suicidetank]

home for me was where her heart was along time ago

[allmeheart]

interesting from the start, how the beginning weaves in at the end, nice job

[Only Me]

I really like it... especially the end... its like, I am mad at you but i love you enough to wait for that 3:30 phone call... I promise that I will still wait for you, even if it hurts...