you know how love bites you in the butt

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A fools attempt

In your hair are dreams we’ll share together
In your eyes the night sky and the stars
Within your arms is a safe haven
Your voice is my song
We will walk together
We’ll laugh and cry
Though the only one in love was me
you were everything to me
and as the night must die to give way to a new
day so you did with me now a new one
has taken my place a place i thought
would be mine forever how silly and futile
my attempt at love it seems that just when i
have the hang of it that warmth slipps away
how you betray and how your "love" changes in a
heart beat

[allmeheart]

love it, only suggestion, not ending two lines in me

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]wow, i really like this, i really do. this is great. thank you so much for sharing ;D i especially like the ending:

how you betray and how your "love" changes in a
heart beat

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[Only Me]

"We will walk together
We’ll laugh and cry" I really like that... short and to the point

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i didnt thinks these things would be on here anymore