Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 30, 2005 9:09:45 GMT -6
I'm basically posting this because I want feedback but also because it is really happening to me. Ever since I wrote THE BREAKUP poem and I couldn't sleep I decided to write a poem about not being able to sleep because your heart is broken and you miss the one person you love so much. I guess I just want to know what you guys think about it. Thanks again for everything. I wouldn't turn to anyone else. Much love, Paige
I'm sitting here wide awake
I'm tired but I cannot sleep
You are crossing through my mind
You aren't leaving
You won't leave
You refuse to leave my mind
and I'm trying so hard to sleep
but my mind won't shut down
Whenever I get up in the morning
I want to go back to sleep
But I end up getting up and thinking of you
I want to call you so bad
but I'm afraid you might be home
and I can't tell you how I feel
I can't tell you that I'm hoping we get back together
I can't tell you that I'm missing you like crazy
And I certainly can't tell you that you are everything I need
So I'm sitting here wide awake
and you still won't leave my mind
That's why I'm writing this poem
In spite of your disbelief in me
and the many things I can do
So it's almost 2 am
and I'm still wishing you would leave my mind
And my heart is slowly healing
as I'm writing all this down
and making sure I laugh out loud
So I can forget that I'm sad
And I'm thinking I'll never be good enough for you
I can't believe you don't believe that we will get back together
After what we've been through
Why would you let one stupid thing ruin everything?
And I'm still wide awake
writing this poem
Now I wonder if I should've said goodbye
but goodbye is forever and hello is never
I will get over this situation but not over you
And boy don't you know that's true
I love you and the many stupid things you do
But you seem to have wanted to leave me behind
In the darkness of my room
So I could cry until I couldn't sleep
And boy didn't that work
Because I'm still sitting here
writing this wide awake.
I'm sitting here wide awake
I'm tired but I cannot sleep
You are crossing through my mind
You aren't leaving
You won't leave
You refuse to leave my mind
and I'm trying so hard to sleep
but my mind won't shut down
Whenever I get up in the morning
I want to go back to sleep
But I end up getting up and thinking of you
I want to call you so bad
but I'm afraid you might be home
and I can't tell you how I feel
I can't tell you that I'm hoping we get back together
I can't tell you that I'm missing you like crazy
And I certainly can't tell you that you are everything I need
So I'm sitting here wide awake
and you still won't leave my mind
That's why I'm writing this poem
In spite of your disbelief in me
and the many things I can do
So it's almost 2 am
and I'm still wishing you would leave my mind
And my heart is slowly healing
as I'm writing all this down
and making sure I laugh out loud
So I can forget that I'm sad
And I'm thinking I'll never be good enough for you
I can't believe you don't believe that we will get back together
After what we've been through
Why would you let one stupid thing ruin everything?
And I'm still wide awake
writing this poem
Now I wonder if I should've said goodbye
but goodbye is forever and hello is never
I will get over this situation but not over you
And boy don't you know that's true
I love you and the many stupid things you do
But you seem to have wanted to leave me behind
In the darkness of my room
So I could cry until I couldn't sleep
And boy didn't that work
Because I'm still sitting here
writing this wide awake.