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Post by Angelamongsociety on May 11, 2005 19:19:37 GMT -6
You think you know me. You think I have it easy. You think you would love to put yourself in my shoes. You think I have it all at my finger tips. You think I am too good for you. You think I could live without you. You think saying good-bye is easy for me. You think I don't miss you. You think I don't wish you where here. You think I don't cry myself to sleep at night. You think seeing you doesn't cause me to fall apart. You think you know me, but obvously not. Because with out you, there is a crack in my heart.
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Post by Xanthic Flower on May 14, 2005 14:39:00 GMT -6
[glow=red,2,300]That's a sad poem. I like it though.[/glow]
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Post by Sharon on May 14, 2005 16:22:56 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]i'm a feeling both an angry and hurting vibe from this piece. maybe you should consider changing some of the "you think" to avoid the repeating, overall it's a good poem, thank you for sharing [/glow]
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suicidetank
Contently A Distraction
very well then
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Post by suicidetank on May 22, 2005 20:11:57 GMT -6
i liked your poem remeinds me of somthing
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Post by Only Me on May 22, 2005 20:44:52 GMT -6
wow... i like it... it really hits that spot in my heart...
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Post by allmeheart on May 23, 2005 21:45:31 GMT -6
i can relate, good job, shows emotion, thats always good
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xxdarkxangelxx
Contently A Distraction
Love me for who I am not who I've become
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Post by xxdarkxangelxx on Dec 4, 2005 13:05:41 GMT -6
I loved it. It's a good expression of being missunderstood by someone you loved
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Post by Laura on Dec 5, 2005 15:50:48 GMT -6
This kind of reminds me of Mariah Carey's "Looking In" ... how people think they see someone but inside they know nothing about them. It reminds me of me, how people thought that just because I have a wealthy family, that I don't have any problems at all. It's like, if my heart breaks, I can just go out and buy a new one, eh? Pardon but f*ck them.
"You think seeing you doesn't cause me to fall apart"
--this reminds me of Dana. This man I adored for nine long years. Nice job.
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Post by jigglytuffy on Dec 5, 2005 16:50:55 GMT -6
Yeah, it is very good. The emotions are clear and strong.
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